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8. Common Errors in Constructing Sentences |
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a) A common error is joining two sentences or two independent clauses incorrectly with an improper punctuation mark instead of using a correct punctuation mark which is the semi-colon, or using a conjunction as the following example shows. EXAMPLE: We don't have a telephone, you will have to come round to the house. The two independent clauses in the sentence are incorrectly joined by a comma.
We can correct the sentence in the following ways:
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| Treat the two clauses as separate sentences with the use of a full-stop (period) for each sentence. |
| We don't have a telephone. You will have to come round to the house. |
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| We can use a coordinating conjunction (and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet) to create a compound sentence. |
| We don't have a telephone, so you will have to come round to the house. |
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| We can turn one of the two clauses into a subordinate or dependent clause. |
| Since we don't have a telephone, you will have to come round to the house. |
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| We can use the semicolon to create a compound sentence. |
| We don't have a telephone; you will have to come round to the hous |
EXAMPLE: I helped them all I could, I even brought my tools to speed up the work. (INCORRECT) I helped them all I could; I even brought my tools to speed up the work. (CORRECT) I helped them all I could and I even brought my tools to speed up the work. (CORRECT)
b) A type of sentence error known as sentence fragment is a group of words that used together does not form a complete sentence.
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| A dependent clause is being used as a sentence. |
| INCORRECT: Because she was the best candidate. |
| INCORRECT: Since ten o'clock this morning. |
| CORRECT: She got the job because she was the best candidate. |
| CORRECT: I've been here since ten o'clock this morning. |
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| The wrong form of a verb is used. |
| INCORRECT: He eaten his lunch just a while ago. |
| INCORRECT: He has showed her how to catch butterflies. |
| CORRECT: He ate his lunch just a while ago. |
| CORRECT: He has shown her how to catch butterflies. |
c) Words and phrases should be put in their rightful places.
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The policeman is a very brave man who caught the thief. (INCORRECT) |
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The policeman who caught the thief is a very brave man. (CORRECT) |
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